There's more to it than that
to the river the trees a small
meander the water is sweet
how did we get this time
was it ever as important
looking backwards if only
Raymond Carver influencing
is this how the journey
they say inner landscape
geography to be discovered
is not out there back and forth
trucks vans the useless tarp
Another fine poem. Good to see the nod to Raymond. I can't get enough of his poems.
ReplyDeleteThanks for encouraging me. I wish I could write like him or a girl version or woman version, I mean.
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