Fiction, Fabulous Fabrication, or Fact?
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Wednesday, March 8, 2017
Something Tells Me
I left the bucket in another place
Mop all alone but knowing what was next
So what if I forgot the gum spray
And the putty knife
The lab doesn't deserve
The white linoleum
so difficult to turn your back
Under the circumstances
This has happened to me too - sometimes the machine takes over and changes things in a positive way, auto-correct, for example, has inserted the 'wrong' word and changed the poem for the better - there must be academics somewhere researching this very topic.
Liking these scenes and the way one image segues into another. Nice atmosphere created with the creative placing of capitals.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jonathan--I don't know how to keep the lines--this is the way it gets published here.
ReplyDeleteThis has happened to me too - sometimes the machine takes over and changes things in a positive way, auto-correct, for example, has inserted the 'wrong' word and changed the poem for the better - there must be academics somewhere researching this very topic.
Deleteha ha--yes
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